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Post by Count Dracula on May 27, 2010 20:32:37 GMT -5
Spell Name: Selective hearing Level:Low Range: Self Description: When Ender use his spells at greenhorn level, his spells give off a special sound. This sound allows Ender to be immune any of his level spells, besides self purpose spells. Drawback: Only works on his own spells.
Spell Name: Sonic Vibration palm Level: Low Range: Mid (7 meters) Description: By smacking his hands together, Vince uses his magic to creates an invisible sound vibration barrier around his hands. Ender then can point his hand into a direction. Then, by releasing the spell, Ender sends out a sonic vibrations air pressure toward his opponent(S). If he does hit, the opponent will start to feel extremely dizzy and have a headache for two posts. The opponent will hear a loud drilling sound once the sonic vibration air pressure hit the victim. The opponent will see everything around them like it spinning. This could cause them to possible attack others by mistake or hurt themselves. Drawback: Hands need to be slap together first. This can only be done five times per thread and then wait another five post to use it again.
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Shinjitu
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Post by Shinjitu on May 27, 2010 21:33:59 GMT -5
The selective hearing spell checks out but for Sonic Vibration Palm, you might want to read over it again and maybe tidy it up. It looks like in some spots the letters of words were erased so it is hard to tell if there is more to it or not (AKA. the Al at the end). Also maybe you should put a little more of a Drawback for Sonic Vibration Palm because slapping his hands together doesn't seem like much of a drawback. Maybe a limit to how many times he can successfully use it?
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Post by Artificial Intelligence on May 27, 2010 21:41:48 GMT -5
Sorry about that, it basically a stronger version of vibration palm with some distance. So when I made my edits to fix it, i kinda messed up.
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Post by Shinjitu on May 27, 2010 21:45:00 GMT -5
It's alright and I understand but everything seems to check out now so...
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